Our Stories.

9 03 2008

After watching a story start about a creepy cellar, (from Teacher’s TV,) class 6 set about writing the rest of the story.

Read a clip from Ciara’s:

It was all quiet at dinner, except for the odd cough from dad.

“You know, I really wanted the house to be finished this year, ” mum announced.  Dad almost choked. And with him doing all the work, who blames him!

I woke the next morning to the usual sounds of shouting.  After 10 minutes or so, I found myself with a torch in my hand, down in the basement looking for dad’s “turbo” drill.  It’s his favourite toy.

“Phewee, it stinks down here!” I thought to myself.  Anyway, my torch was going bonkers so it was impossible to see things clearly, but no matter, there was no drill!

Creeeeek!.

What about a snippet from Robert:

“How hard can it be to find a drill in a dark smelly basement?” I whispered to no-one in particular.  Like a bird on it’s last legs, the dusty torch, which had been getting dimmer by the scond, flickered and then went off.


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